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A contest game


Pick of 2 of your favorite actresses and 3 actors to create your favorite story as you wish. The story must includes the beginning, middle and the end.


Requirements:


Each paragraph must have 5 sentences for maximum. Use quotes.You only can write a short story with 3 paragrahs and specific details to tell what happens in the story.


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The winner will be announce on this SPECIAL GAMES page is on 10/23/06. Hope everyone will participate and enjoy it.



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I think ths belongs in the Funzone games, because it has a deadline.


Anyway, here's my short story (I don't think i'm gonna use quotes):


Title: A Cure for Love.
Theme: Love
Cast:
(Can i do 3 guys and 3 girls-Even numbers are better)
-Bowie Lam.
-Jessica Hsuan.
-Moses Chan.
-Melissa Ng.
-Yoyo Mung.
-Michael Tong.
(They're all doctors by the way).


Bowie and Jessica have been married for nearly 9 years now, and they have a 5-year-old son, named Jason. Bowie wishes to have another child (a daughter), but Jessica refuses to. This causes them to have marital problems. Meanwhile, Yoyo breaks up with her boyfriend of 1 year, Michael, because he is incapable of committing to their relationship. After the break up, Yoyo still has feelings for Michael, who is in love with her best friend, Melissa, who is also Jessica's younger sister.


Melissa is also getting chased after by Moses, who is a widower. Unpredictably, Jessica falls pregnant, and accepts her fate. Melissa and Moses then spends more time together, as they are selected as the Hospital's representatives for a health program. In this time, Melissa also develops feelings fro Michael. Later, Yoyo finds out about Melissa's love for Michael, Yoyo decides to give Michael up for her best friend. Moses soon expresses his feelings to Melissa, but is rejected. Moses and Yoyo then comfort each other.


On the outside, Melissa and Michael bicker a lot, but inside, they are deeply in love with each other. Jessica and Bowie's son Jason, drowns at a swimming pool, wihich causes a big impact on Jessica, and causes Jessica to have a miscarriage. After this event, Jessica and Bowie's relationship worsens. Moses and Yoyo begins to develop feelings for each other. One of Yoyo's patients is in love with her, and asks her out, but she says no, which makes him very angry (he has psychiatric problems). He then kidnaps her and tries to kill her, but she is luckily saved by Moses. After saving Yoyo, Moses suddenly collapses, and it is revealed that he has a brain tumour. Moses soon recovers with Yoyo by his side.


One day, while Michael and Melissa are walking together, they trip over, and kiss. This makes them feel very awkward, and Melissa begins to avoid him every time she sees him. Michael then has enough courage to ask her out, and she says yes. After the recovery, Moses and Yoyo start dating. Bowie and Jessica's relationship gets better as they take on marital conselling, but is still reeling from the death of Jason. In the end Moses and Yoyo, and Michael and Melissa gets married, while Bowie and Jessica's relationship returns to normal, and they are happy to find out that Jessica is pregnant. Everyone lives happily ever after.


The end.



-- Edited by AM_092 at 21:39, 2006-10-23

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aw..........it is a good story....not too complicated.........not so boring.....VERY GOOD


here is some of my thoughts:


1. jessica and bowie relationship is kinda ......um......boring......b/c thier son died when she got pregnant...then later she got pregnant again......their relationship gets worse when their son died.........it is kinda familiar with AR 4 - marco and joyce.


2. the people's relationships are hard to understand..but i can understand it


3. there is too many shyness......like the boys...


sorry for ani offensive thoughts


oh well, these are just my opinion.......but i can tell u something.......u did a great job for a short story like that.....u cover everything.......that's very good......it would be better, if u make a long story, more details........it would be so enjoyable to read.



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Thanks for your comments.


I agree that there are some typical stuff. I actually had a lot more characters (because this is actually one of my fan fictions, but i shortened it).



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